Performance Poetry

SERENITY
How lovely is the sound of trickling water
And the beauty that nature gives
My wish is to be in a spot just like this
And live in a small wooden cottage
There would be no need for green luscious gardens
When carpeting the earth are flowers
My favorites are daffodils, and lilies
The sweet smell hits your nose like the drug you’ve been missing.
My sweet serenity, this to you
You’ll be in my dreams for now but I swear you’ll come true.]

1) The voice in this poem seems to be dreamy. Like the kind of daydream that takes you to the place you have always desired. The one that will free your mind.
2) With excitment and anticipation of this place to be of one I will truely live someday.
3)Just hands in the movement of trickling water. And when the smell hits your nose..
4) The whole idea of acting excited..I have found it really pisses people off. Because most people live unhappy lives and happy people are annoying!! HOW LAME. What seems exciting is for me to see how the rest of the class will perform their pieces.
5) All poetry is meant to be performed. In order to get the full affect of the poem, it's best read aloud. So your really EXPERIENCING the piece.
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